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#1 Hamura Uzumaki [WIP] on Fri Jan 15, 2016 5:23 am




Who are you?




Name: Hamura Uzumaki
Alias:
Red Demon (Akayasha)
Devil King of the Sixth Heaven
Hamura of the Red Sky
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Asexual
Character Alignment: True Neutral

Appearance: Hamura's appearance starts with his most striking aspect, his hair colour. It is a deep red which is the traditional colour of the Uzumaki Clan's hair. It hangs about his head and covers the majority of his head, it is soft and smooth with a slight shine to its appearance. It usually hangs over his face and covers his left eye and a portion of his face, despite covering his eye and parts of his face it never affects his combat abilities. His red hair is very obvious, it is very difficult for him to hide in plain sight, it is also gives him quite a "cute" look as many women put it.

He has deep cobalt eyes, which are sharp and piercing in gaze, just his gaze often makes people shrink away as though his eyes can see their deepest and most personal thoughts. His eyes are somewhat human lacking, his eyes always seem analysing and lacking of human qualities on first gaze although when his family or friends are threatened his eyes take such a sharp stare that if looks could kill you would be well and truly dead.

As well as his eyes and hair, he has a pale white skin tone. Both as a natural tone and made whiter by living underground. His very pale skin really does make one focus on his eyes and hair. His body itself is quite lean and thin, he is 175.5 cm tall and weighs 40.1 kg, he is reasonably fast as it is his main form of combat, with his lack of strength he makes up for it with a strong stamina and a high skill in agility.

He doesn't have any markings or tattoos although he has been known to create seals on his body which he seals things into, he often hides these however and so no one sees them due to a simple technique. Aside from that he is someone who isn't really interested in marking himself although he is youthful and the Uzumaki's incredibly strong life force will keep him young and alive for a long time to come.

Style/Clothing: Never a person for normality Hamura is always seen in a crimson cloak with white lining, it is zipped up the centre and quite loose. Underneath it he traditionally doesn't wear a top since he comments it is more difficult to use the Asura Path. His attire has no collar and instead has a hood which he variates between off and on. He wears simple grey pants, although he prefers not to wear shoes he will wear leg warmers and shinobi sandals if the time arises or he is in Kagegakure.

This attire of his also comes with two other variants, the armoured attire and a Black variant. The black attire is simply the same but with a black cloak which can sometimes replace the hood with a high collar which would cover his face. His armoured attire is usually the black version with red armour adorning it like that seen by the first Hokage. On all of his attires he wears a demon horn forehead protector with the Kanji for "Shadow" on it,; "影".

Personality: (What is your character like? How do they behave while in combat? Around others? When alone? Do they enjoy fighting? Are they a pacifist? Aim for at least 2-3 paragraphs here, us mods want to be able to get a feel for how your character would act, etc when we read the app.)

(For Likes, Dislikes, Ambitions, etc, go for 1-3 sentences per point, more if you wish.)

Likes and Strengths:

• Peace - A big believer in the way of peace, Hamura aims to bring the world into a state of harmony with his Rinnegan. He will always aim for peace in the long run and isn't typically the killing type unless he is sure it is necessary.
• Reading - Hamura loves to read, he can spend simply hours and days just reading scrolls and other books which are usually educational. He is truly a scholar at heart and as such he is incredibly knowledgeable in so many fields.
• Cunning - Quite a cunning lad, Hamura's strength is in the mind, he is always thinking ahead and sometimes it appears he can read someone like a book. This cunning nature seems to make him in some cases almost god-like. He is so good at analysis that when he plans he seems to be able to see the future if he reads the situation right.
• Knowledgable - He is a well informed person with a web of spies and informants, he knows a lot of jutsu and the weaknesses of a variety of techniques this also encompasses the geography of Kagegakure. Despite being a simple jonin Hamura is a skilled scholar and prefers to know about his opposition before fighting them.
• Will - Hamura has immense willpower, he never surrenders or gives up and if he is forced to then he will return in a more powerful state and try again and again until success. If he wants something done he will shift the heavens and move mountains to do it.



Dislikes, Fears, and Weaknesses:
• Strife - Hamura hates when people clash with the intention of killing, maiming or malicious intent of any kind. He hates when war brings its effects onto the innocent people who can do nothing to stop it. Strife is what made his will grow.
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• Failure - Hamura fears that he might fail in his mission to bring peace to the shinobi world and that his entire efforts will fail. He fears that his death or his failure might make things worse and therefore in his mind there is no room for failure.


Ambitions/Dreams/Goals:
• What
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Battle Specs




Fighting Style: (How does you character prefer to fight? Close range? Medium range? Long range? Do they know specific martial arts? Weapon forms? Are they a guerilla warfare style fighter? Etc.)

Nature Transformations:
Fire Release
Wind Release
Lightning Release
Earth Release
Water Release
Yin Release
Yang Release
Yin-Yang Release

Kekkei Genkai/Special Characteristics:

(Kekkei Genkai and/or Special Characteristics are special powers, techniques and/or unique appearances like cat ears and a tail for example or in basic terms, something unique to your character. They are obtained at birth or through freak occurrences. These cannot be things you would able to teach others or simply obtain through hard work along.)


Name: Rinnegan
Effect: The Rinnegan grants the wielder a wide range of abilities without any known chakra requirements to keep the eyes active. Certain abilities are only available to the original owner of the Rinnegan, but the possession of even a single transplanted Rinnegan can grant overwhelming power. Rinnegan are able to see chakra, as well as its flow within the body and at least eight tenketsu, but cannot see through obstructions such as smoke bombs. One who possesses the Rinnegan can master any jutsu as well as all five nature transformations with ease. Rinnegan users are also able to create black receivers to which they can transmit their chakra, and counter the effects of the Infinite Tsukuyomi.

Possessing the Rinnegan grants the user a family of abilities collectively known as the Six Paths Techniques: the gravitational powers of the Deva Path; the ability to mechanise one's body with the Asura Path; control over others' souls with the Human Path; the menagerie of summons available to the Animal Path; the limitless absorptive potential of the Preta Path; and access to the King of Hell through the Naraka Path. These abilities can be distributed to the Six Paths of Pain — six bodies embedded with black receivers, which the user can control remotely. A seventh ability, the Outer Path, is said to allow the user to preside over life and death, granting the ability to revive the dead, as well as summon and control the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path, and manifest chakra chains to bind others. The dōjutsu also grants the user a shared field of vision with the Six Paths of Pain, the King of Hell, and the Animal Path's summons, all of which possess copies of the Rinnegan.

Hamura's Rinnegan is strange in the sense of its red colour which is unlike that of the traditional purple colour of the eye. It is somewhat different as it is mutated from his father's Uchiha heritage. This is because the eye was in conflict of genetics and despite his Rinnegan manifesting, his Uchiha Heritage gave the eye a distinct red colour although it grants no abilities of the Sharingan itself.

Animal Path:
The Animal Path (畜生道, Chikushōdō) grants a Rinnegan user the ability of summoning various animals and creatures to aid it in battle. These creatures appear to be immortal, as they were killed and later summoned again. Worthy of note, summoning creatures through the Animal Path require no blood sacrifice or hand seals. The Animal Path can also summon people using hand signs. Tactics-wise, the Animal Path's primary role in battle appears to consist of overwhelming multiple opponents with a barrage of summons.
Asura Path:
The Asura Path (修羅道, Shuradō) grants the user the ability to augment their own body to summon mechanised armour and various ballistic and mechanical weaponry. Through the Asura Path, the user is able to form up to four additional arms and two additional faces, as well as a folded, serrated blade-like sash around their waist. These additional appendages, as well as the user's body as a whole, are augmented with a variety of mechanical weaponry, which they can access at will. The user can fire their forearms as long-range projectiles or pull them off to reveal and fire a cluster of segmented missiles at targets. They are also able to protrude a set of flexible blades and drills or a series of mechanical tendrils from their arms, as well as quickly propel themselves forward by emitting a burst of chakra from holes in their feet. The user can also release a powerful chakra blast, which is capable of destroying numerous buildings at once, either by transforming one of their hands into a cannon or by opening the crown of their head. Additionally, the Asura Path is able to survive otherwise fatal damage due to its mechanised insides.
Deva Path:
The Deva Path (天道, Tendō) grants the user the ability to manipulate attractive and repulsive forces with objects and people. These gravity manipulating techniques, however, cannot be performed in rapid succession; the amount of time required to recharge after use varies depending on the scale of the technique used, five seconds being the basic minimum. The Deva Path also grants another ability: Chibaku Tensei which allows the user to create a huge makeshift terrestrial body from all the surrounding matter that is attracted to a black sphere released by this technique.
Human Path:
The Human Path (人間道, Ningendō) grants a Rinnegan user the ability to read the mind of any target by placing his hand on the target's head or chest and yanking the soul out of the body. Though it provides intel by getting well guarded secrets, the technique inevitably kills the target. In battle, the Human Path is relatively worthless compared to the other Paths.
Naraka Path:
The Naraka Path (地獄道, Jigokudō) grants the user two main uses: interrogation and restoration, by using the King of Hell.

The Naraka Path ability makes heavy use of the King of Hell. The King of Hell is a large head which sprouts out of the ground surrounded by purple flames. It also possesses the Rinnegan as well as the shared field of vision along with the other summons. The King of Hell could fulfil two purposes: interrogation and restoration. To interrogate, the Naraka Path need only catch hold of a person, causing the King of Hell to appear before them. With the victim seemingly paralysed, the Naraka Path begins questioning them. After answers are given, the King of Hell will unzip its mouth to release tendril-like arms and would draw out an apparition of the victim's life force energy in the form of an enlarged tongue. The King of Hell would then proceed to pass its judgement. If the person was lying or refused to answer the questions, the King of Hell would remove their tongue and consume it, apparently killing them. However, if they told the truth, they would be spared, although left extremely exhausted.

The second ability the Naraka Path possessed is the ability to repair any damage. To do so the Naraka Path has the King of Hell ingest the damaged body with its tendril-like arms into its mouth, then, after some time, the destroyed body will emerge from its mouth, completely rejuvenated. With its restorative abilities, the Naraka Path can easily be regarded as the most valuable body if the Six Paths of Pain is being used through six different bodies. The Naraka Path however, is only able to restore one body at a time. The Naraka Path can also transport bodies and souls using the King of Hell.
Outer Path:
The Outer Path (外道, Gedō) is the seventh Path — an ability granted to the wielder of the Rinnegan. With the Outer Path, the user is able to revive the dead, transmit chakra to receivers, as well as manifest chakra chains. A user of the Outer Path is said to exist outside the realm of life and death, and has the ability to revive the dead with the Outer Path — Samsara of Heavenly Life Technique. However, this technique may only be available to users who are truly alive themselves, and only an authentic Rinnegan (Not a remake from the Edo Tensei) may summon the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path.

The Outer Path allows the user to bind and potentially control the movements of those who touch the user's black receivers. By implanting the receivers into corpses or reincarnated individuals, the user can control bodies. These bodies, as well as the King of Hell and the creatures summoned through the Animal Path, all have the Rinnegan reflected in their eyes and share visual information with the user through the Outer Path. The user can also manifest the chakra chains of the Demonic Statue to restrict anyone who touches the receivers with an even greater binding power.

Extremely powerful users can call back people from the Pure Land, When summoned in this manner, the deceased person does not have an actual body, but appears as a mass of flickering chakra in full possession of their personality and memories. Once the user ends the technique, the summoned souls dwindle and ultimately disappear completely. It can also undo another person's use of the Impure World Reincarnation technique, releasing the souls from their vessels and sending them to the Pure Land.

NOTE: Black Text is currently unavailable due to Hamura not being at the level of Hagoromo Ōtsutsuki.
Preta Path:
The Preta Path (餓鬼道, Gakidō) grants the user the ability to absorb chakra in any form using the Blocking Technique Absorption Seal. This ability is primarily defensive in nature as it is capable of absorbing ninjutsu-based techniques, thereby nullifying its effect. This technique can also take the form of a barrier around the user's entire body, allowing them to absorb attacks from all directions. In addition to this, the Preta Path is able to absorb chakra from an individual through physical contact. Although the user is still vulnerable to the effects of turning into a stone statue from absorbing too much senjutsu chakra.


General Techniques:

(Techniques are not extra abilities, but rather, skills which use your abilities in more extreme forms beyond their basic use. For example... let's say I can shoot fire from my fingers. A technique might be gathering a whole bunch of fire for a few minutes and then shooting a fire-laser from my fingers, doing much more damage than what my ability normally would on it's own. Other special or basic techniques using your normal control over your chakra can also be added here. Think of abilities as special powers - and think of techniques as moves which use the powers you already have. These are moves your character was taught or trained and developed on their own. They are things anyone would be able to learn and perform unless they are dependent on your unique race or abilities. Examples are using a Special Characteristic, let's say large bat wings to block against a attack or something that utilises the above to more degrees then what it is like the sharingan Genjutsu.)
These are not used for extra elemental techniques or jutsu, extra abilities and powers.
Limit 4.


Technique Name: Naidō Inner Path
Technique Description:(Include any cool-down or charge times needed. Times are based on posts.)

Technique Effect Chart:

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Technique Name: Tengokudō Heaven Path
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Technique Name: Jingokudō Hell Path
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Technique Name: Rengokudō Purgatory Path
Technique Description: Rengoku as Hamura named it is the technique which allows Hamura to interact with the Limbo Realm. Unlike normal usage with the Limbo world where most people with the Rinnegan simply see it, Hamura can interact with it and in some cases shape it. He can use it like a pocket dimension through casting a hand sign and creating a gaping dark void which allows him and others to enter the Limbo. Using this technique, he is able to summon out the souls and creatures of trapped in limbo to fight for him. In addition to this, he is able to overlay Limbo onto the physical world.

Technique Effect Chart:
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Tell me your story...





History: Hamura's history starts before he was born, his parents met in the Third Shinobi War, as allies with Konoha the Uzumaki Clan and Uzugakure joined with the Leaf. Hamura's mother was a high-level Fuuinjutsu user, she was also the daughter of the Whirlpool Village Head and there she met Soren Uchiha. Soren was a leaf ninja who was famed for his defeat of the Seven Swordsman who bore the Longsword; Nuibari. For this victory Soren wielded the sword from then on. They met when Soren was going undercover and needed Nuibari sealed so he didn't attract attention with it. Hamura's mother Shiko, was the only one who could seal the S-Rank weapon effectively to Soren's specifications.

Their love bloomed immediately, they grew close over the war period and fell in love. After the destruction of the majority of villages, under the new Kumogakure. Soren and a pregnant Shiko were found by a ground patrol of Kumo-nin. They took them in as they recognised Soren's Sharingan and the Nuibari, it was also the idea of the Uzumaki Clan fuuinjutsu to be theirs although when they got to Kumo they soon found out it was more of a prison. They had everything they needed or wanted although they were restricted in where they could go. Hamura was born three months later in Kumo.

Being taken to the Medical centre Shiko gave birth to Hamura. He was strong and healthy although the doctor found a strange anomaly in his DNA, his body was theorised to be able to harbour any genetic material as though it were his own. This would provide incredible feats if they could harness the strange genetic trait. However after a few days of attempts to find some way of harnessing it the doctor resigned his ambitious dreams and gave up.

He grew up with his parents and it was a quiet childhood. He was trained by Shiko in Fuuinjutsu and in Ninjutsu by Soren, in his spare time he would read and study. At a young age he became a prodigy although Kumo didn't want him to get to strong considering it was well known that his parents hated Kumo for the destruction of all the other villages including their own, this negative aspect rubbed off on a young Hamura who grew to despise the floating village which he was trapped on.

He grew up loving his parents, he greatly admired his father and loved his mother. He was a bit of a mother's boy due to even when it made sense he would take his mother's side in all arguments and would spend hours learning all about Fuuinjutsu just to be around her. However nobody suspected that Hamura's DNA created a union which was almost identical to the First Sage of the Six Paths, his Mother was an Uzumaki and all of her ancestors were however on Soren's side he had received Uchiha and Senju DNA, his Uncle Tenjin Senju. one of the Hokage's advisors when Konoha was destroyed by Kumo showed remarkable skill in Mokuton.

One day Hamura was learning Fuuinjutsu with his mother when two men entered their house, they were rude and cruel demanding Shiko to give them the Uzumaki Clan Fuuinjutsu, however when she resisted the first man punched her and she fell down. Hamura was ignored and then the second man pulled a Kunai out and put it up to her throat asking her again. Hamura lost all sense, they were threatening the thing he loved most and under the Uchiha Clan Lineage, his doujutsu activated but it wasn't the Sharingan. A genetic mix-up had instead created the Rinnegan, it didn't stop him however from slaughtering the two men with the Human Path and removing their souls as well as the information that they were meant to kill Hamura and his family if they didn't give up something.

His father came home a few minutes later and saw the bodies, Shiko hadn't stopped hugging Hamura after his eyes activation. When he told his father and mother the information he received he told them they must escape and then using Rengoku for the first time created a portal which would take them to the ruins of Iwagakure, after its use he passed out but some Kage shinobi witnessed it and immediately welcomed them to Kagegakure, they actually cared about these people.

Being seven then it happened Hamura joined the academy although after a few months he had learned the five chakra natures as well as Yin-Yang, he easily mastered everything offered to him and as such graduated at age eight.

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